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Well, japanese is over and I'm drawing again :0

I used the philosopy- "two S-shapes" for this one :) Do you see the S-shapes? XD

The neck is a little wierd, it looked fine on the sketch but things have a tendency to move around a little when I paint :3

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:iconknuxphntm:
This is awesome

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:iconbloodmilk:
Aaaargh! Frickin' awesome work! The coloring rocks my socks!

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:iconrioni-riishu:
Ooh, what gorgeous colors! I really like her outfit. The detail, and the flow of the fabric is all really nice. My only real crit is with her crotch- either the pants are rather unrealistically low, or- and I think this is the problem, actually- she should have more there- it should come down lower. Actually, it might be a bit of both. I think her neck looks fine- in this style, it being thin looks good. I love those sketchy flowers, too! Beautiful work.

-Ri
:icontrakker:
ack O_o *gobsmacked* awsome all over XD

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:iconflinden:
Ah :) She is supposed to arch her back a little, that's why it looks shorter. Maybe it didn't quite get through :)

Thx again for commenting XD

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:iconqhcowgrl07:
wow i like it alot..........the only thing i could say is her face is cut off kinda funny

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:icontwincastx:
this is crazy!!! i really like it!!! :headbang:

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:iconresident-bishounen:
OOh, I see the S-shapes. Her body's got one and the flow of her pigtails are two more. I love the costume design, and the pose.

The shading in the bit of the pants covering her shins seems a bit 'muddy'. That's not exactly the best word for it, but I can't think of any other one right now. Anyway, I love the shading in her sleeves.

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:icondarthmongoose:
Umm, I think stranger and more noticable than the neck is the fact that she has no crotch and no ribcage. The line up her stomach goes right up to her breasts, when it should stop a little way away because ofthe start of her ribcage. The body should be longer than it is, I think that's where the problems are stemming from.
Otherwise, the colour looks great. Really nice background too, and an interesting pose and character design.

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